Really good work so far. I like your use of images. Don't forget outside sources. Also, remember to introduce why your'e bringing up each article and follow up with your response. Remember to build on the discussion. One thing to keep in mind is what you lay out in teh title. You first duty to your reader is to describe why it seems like a good idea. Then you'll want to lay out its flaws, why you might be wary of its success. I don't know if the Hanlon is the msot useful for what you want to point out. Consider looking for the essays that help you say what you want to say (especially if it helped launch you to a new idea or opinion)